📋 Report Writing — the format

Present findings on a situation to someone who has to act on them, and recommend what to do next.

Writing for: A named figure in authority who asked for the report — a head teacher, a council, a manager. They want conclusions, not atmosphere.

Register: Formal

Length: Usually 250–400 words. Check the mark scheme for your paper.

Audience: A named figure in authority who asked for the report — a head teacher, a council, a manager

The format, in order

  1. 1

    Title

    A plain, specific title. Not a creative one.

    Report on the Condition of the School Library

  2. 2

    To / From / Date

    Only if the task implies a formal document. Keep it to one line each.

    To: The Head Teacher From: Head of Student Council

  3. 3

    Introduction

    State the purpose and how you gathered the information, in two or three sentences. No scene-setting.

    This report sets out the findings of a survey of 120 students conducted in March, and recommends three changes to library provision.

  4. 4

    Findings

    The body. One sub-heading per issue. Factual, impersonal, evidenced — give numbers where the task supplies them.

  5. 5

    Conclusion

    Draw the findings together into a judgement. Do not introduce new information here.

  6. 6

    Recommendations

    Numbered, specific, and achievable. Each one should follow visibly from a finding.

    1. Extend opening hours to 17:30 on weekdays.

What the marks are for

Content

  • ✓Every point the task asked for is covered
  • ✓Ideas developed rather than listed
  • ✓Recommendations that follow from the findings
  • ✓A consistent sense of the named audience

Language

  • ✓Impersonal, formal register sustained throughout
  • ✓Sub-headings used to organise, not to pad
  • ✓Varied sentence structures
  • ✓Precise, non-emotive vocabulary

What loses marks

  • ✗Writing it as an essay with no headings — the format itself carries marks
  • ✗Slipping into first-person opinion in the findings section
  • ✗Recommendations that do not connect to anything in the findings
  • ✗Using contractions ('don't', 'it's') in a formal document
  • ✗Inventing statistics when the task already supplied data to use

Phrases that work

  • This report aims to…
  • The findings indicate that…
  • A significant proportion of respondents reported…
  • It is evident from the data that…
  • In light of these findings, it is recommended that…
  • Should these measures be adopted, …

Before you hand it in

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Where this is examined

  • · Cambridge IGCSE First Language English (0500) — directed writing
  • · Cambridge IGCSE ESL (0510) — writing
  • · Edexcel International GCSE English Language (4EA1) — transactional writing
  • · Cambridge O Level English Language (1123)

Word counts, paper numbers and mark allocations are set by the syllabus for your session and change between series. Always check your current syllabus and your teacher's guidance before relying on a length or a mark split given here.

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