Organising Writing to achieve Specific Effects

Worked examples (6)

• 1Withholding u0026 delayed disclosure — order the information, not just the words
• 2Juxtaposition for effect — let the ARRANGEMENT make the point
• 3Evidentiary logic u0026 escalation — order your evidence so each point raises the stakes
• 4Foreshadowing u0026 payoff — plant early, harvest late
• 5Structural irony — let the arrangement say what the words do not
• 6Ordering for emphasis — climactic vs anti-climactic arrangement

Model answers (6)

• ✓Model answer — 9093 Paper 1 Section A, directed-response style
• ✓Model answer 2
• ✓Model answer — 9093 Paper 2 Section B, extended writing
• ✓Model answer — 9093 Paper 2 Section B, extended writing
• ✓Model answer — 9093 Paper 2 Section B, extended narrative
• ✓Model answer — 9093 Paper 2 Section A, reflective commentary

Worked examples (6)

• 1Cyclical / circular structure u0026 bookending
• 2Parallelism u0026 structural symmetry
• 3Repetition, refrain u0026 leitmotif (with purpose)
• 4Juxtaposition u0026 antithesis at the structural level
• 5Climactic build, anticlimax u0026 bathos; end-focus u0026 foregrounding
• 6Rhetorical patterning as DISCOURSE architecture (tricolon, anaphora, epistrophe, antithesis)

Model answers (6)

• ✓Model answer — 9093 Paper 2 Section A, directed response
• ✓Model answer 2
• ✓Model answer — 9093 Paper 2 Section B, extended writing
• ✓Model answer — 9093 Paper 2 Section B, extended writing
• ✓Model answer — 9093 Paper 2 Section B, extended writing
• ✓Model answer — 9093 Paper 2 Section A, reflective commentary