The high-frequency grammar errors — and the fixes that protect your band
Five grammar errors account for most AO3 mark-loss. Learn to spot and fix each one and you defend 45% of Paper 1 and 25% of Paper 2.
AO3 is the largest objective in Paper 1 (45%) and a quarter of Paper 2 (25%). The band descriptors hinge on one phrase: errors that impede communication pull the band down. So the goal is not perfection — it is removing the errors that make a sentence stumble or mislead. Five errors do most of the damage.
1. Subject-verb agreement. A singular subject takes a singular verb; a plural subject takes a plural verb. Errors creep in when words come between the subject and verb.
- Wrong: 'Technology have changed our lives.' (subject 'technology' is singular)
- Right: 'Technology has changed our lives.'
- Trap: 'The range of policies are limited.' The subject is 'range' (singular), not 'policies', so it should be 'The range of policies is limited.'
2. Tense consistency. Pick a tense and stay in it; do not drift between past and present in the same point.
- Wrong: 'The government introduces a reform and then cancelled it.' (present then past)
- Right: 'The government introduced a reform and then cancelled it.'
3. Run-on sentences and comma splices. Two complete sentences cannot be joined by just a comma (a comma splice) or by nothing at all (a run-on).
- Wrong (comma splice): 'Democracy is valuable, it gives citizens a voice.'
- Fix options: use a full stop ('Democracy is valuable. It gives citizens a voice.'), a semicolon ('Democracy is valuable; it gives citizens a voice.'), or a conjunction ('Democracy is valuable because it gives citizens a voice.').
4. Sentence fragments. A sentence needs a subject and a finite verb. A fragment is an incomplete piece punctuated as if it were whole.
- Wrong: 'Which is why surveillance is dangerous.' (subordinate clause standing alone)
- Right: 'This is why surveillance is dangerous.' (or join it to the previous sentence).
5. Pronoun clarity. Every 'it', 'this', 'they' must point unambiguously to one noun.
- Wrong: 'The state monitors the media, and this is a problem.' ('this' = the monitoring? the media? be specific)
- Right: 'The state monitors the media, and this surveillance is a problem.'
- Subject-verb agreement: match the verb to the real subject (singular/plural), ignoring words in between.
- Tense consistency: choose a tense and hold it across the point.
- Comma splices / run-ons: never join two complete sentences with only a comma — use a full stop, semicolon or conjunction.
- Fragments: every sentence needs a subject and a finite verb.
- Pronoun clarity: make every 'it', 'this' and 'they' point to one clear noun.