Informal letter anatomy
Same structural skeleton as a formal letter; different vocabulary.
Salutation.
- 'Dear Sam,' / 'Hi Tom,' — first names.
- 'Dear Gran,' / 'Dear Auntie Rose,' — relationships.
- The COMMA after the name is the same as formal letters.
Opening — warm.
- Ask after the recipient: 'Hope you're doing well.'
- Reference your last contact: 'Thanks for your letter — it really cheered me up.'
- THEN signal what this letter is about.
Body — conversational paragraphs.
- Contractions are allowed and expected: I'm, you've, we'd.
- Personal pronouns throughout: I, you, we.
- Sentence rhythm varies — short bursts mixed with longer reflective sentences.
- Still uses paragraphs. Still has topic sentences (just more conversationally phrased).
Embedded narrative.
- Informal letters often describe an event.
- Sensory detail + (optional) direct speech + reflection.
Closing — personal.
- 'Hope to hear from you soon.'
- 'Looking forward to seeing you next week.'
- 'Let me know what you think.'
Sign-off — friendly.
- 'Love,' (close family/friends)
- 'Take care,' / 'All the best,' / 'Yours,' (friends)
- NEVER 'Yours sincerely' — that's formal-only.
Cambridge tip. The structural discipline is identical to a formal letter. The thing that changes is REGISTER. Many candidates think informal = unstructured; mark schemes reward informal letters that still have clear paragraph structure and recognisable openings/closings.
- First-name salutation, friendly sign-off.
- Contractions and personal pronouns.
- Still has paragraphs and structure.
- Body can include narrative anecdote.